THE FOURTH BOOKE OF THE FAERIE QUEENE CONTAYNING THE LEGEND OF CAMBEL AND TRIAMOND, OR OF FRIENDSHIP. I. THE rugged forhead, that with grave forefight That better were in vertues difcipled, Then with vaine poemes weeds to have their fancies fed. Triamond,] All the editions read Telamond; but Triamond is the true name. See F. Q. iv. ii. 31. CHURCH. I. 1. The rugged forhead, that with grave forefight &c.] In the Letter (which I printed formerly) to Mr. Weft concerning a new edition of Spenfer, I obferved that the Lord Treasurer Burleigh was hinted at in these verses. And I find that Mr. Birch, in his Life of Spenfer, has been pleased to concur likewife in the fame obfervation. UPTON. II. Such ones ill iudge of love, that cannot love, Ne in their frofen hearts feele kindly flame: Forthy they ought not thing unknowne re prove, Ne naturall affection faultleffe blame For fault of few that have abufd the fame : For it of honor and all vertue is The roote, and brings forth glorious flowres of fame, That crowne true lovers with immortall blis, The meed of them that love, and do not live amiffe. III. Which whofo lift looke backe to former ages, And call to count the things that then were donne, Shall find that all the workes of those wife fages, And brave exploits which great heroës wonne, Which to his Critias, fhaded oft from funne, The which thefe Stoicke cenfours cannot well deny. III. 9. The which thefe Stoicke cenfours cannot well deny.] These reflections caft on the Stoicks, as being rigid and fevere in their notions of love, are not true. Zeno differed from Plato IV. To fuch therefore I do not fing at all; Queene, In whofe chaft breft all bountie naturall And treasures of true love enlocked beene, Bove all her fexe that ever yet was seene; To her I fing of love, that loveth best, And beft is lov'd of all alive I weene; To her this fong most fitly is addrest, The Queene of love, and Prince of peace from heaven bleft. V. Which that he may the better deigne to heare, Do thou, dred Infant, Venus dearling dove, in manner more than in matter: and all the Stoicks looked up to Socrates as the father of true philofophy. I will venture to fay, Spenfer should have written, "The which thofe Cynicke cenfours cannot well deny." UPTON. V. 3. imperious feare,] By fear he means an awful majesty raising fear in those who approach her. JORTIN. V. 7. From thy fweete-fmyling Mother] Adu yeháσa, dulce ridens: he calls her in F. Q. iv. x. 47. Mother of laughter, Φιλομμειδής Αφροδίτη, Hom. Il. γ'. 424. UPTON. Sprinckle her heart, and haughtie courage foften, That the may hearke to love, and reade this leffon often. V. 9. he gave it, and reade this lesson often.] Perhaps " and read his leffon often." That is, The leffon which Love dictates, as the addrefs requires. UPTON. CANTO I. Fayre Britomart faves Amoret: Twixt Scudamour and Blandamour: I. OF lovers fad calamities of old I. 4. Then that of Amorets &c.] So all the editions. Spenfer, I imagine, wrote thus: "Then that of Florimels unworthie paine, "And this of Amorets hart-binding chaine:" The conftruction plainly requires it; and the miftake, by a flip of the printer's eye, was eaty. See a like inftance, F. Q. i. xi, 39. CHURCH. I. 8. That I with teares &c.] The poet fpeaks in his own perfon, how he himself is affected in the meer relation: fo Ariofto, while he is relating the story of Angelica going to be devoured of the monster, turns to himself, C. viii. 66. "Io no'l dirò, che fi il dolor mi muove." UPTON. |